On a silent night When I was engulfed in dark clouds Pondering on the essence of faith seen and unseen
My inner-voice thundered to me:
Focus not on the actual that earthly minds can calculate
Dive into the universal lake of nature.
The divine is of all that is created and recreated
Like season are to nature
Mankind is to cycles…
There’s a flow that shouldn’t be disturbed
The price of suffering will be at hand
And yet I tell you – there’s no higher learning
Without suffering…
Wisdom then should be a bed of comfort
Knowledge without common-sense is a lover
That is………………destined to be-head you…
Everything you see, you can’t hear—lightning?
Everything you hear, you can’t see—thunder?
Do your eyes and ears deceive you?
Do you see me with your eyes?
Do you hear me with your ears?
One doesn’t have great evidence to
Believe nothing.!?
This is knowing the unknown
This is not knowing the known…
Whoa. Such a profound last stanza! Such thoughts assembled provide a strong framework for midnight climbing. My upper body strength is not quite there but I’m ready for the challenge of your musings. Nice!
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Thanks Diana, I was challenged with this! It is so much there, that I have not untangled. I did not know what I wrote until my pen rested. lol…my moment of going insane to gain sanity. by the way i love your metaphoric response.
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It’s really something when we begin to unravel on the page and words scatter, hopefully in a coherent way. I think you are a terrific writer – a nice variety on your blog by the way. I also like the way you unveil without revealing…. yourself 🙂
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yes it is something. I am humbled by a writer of your magnitude to graciously consider me a terrific writer. you have me especially smiling with the title mirroring me! Absolutely, some read and a few translate… you are like me, you have a shovel!
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Very intriguing!
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thank you for the visit, read and comment
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Typo alert:
‘lightening’ should be ‘lightning’
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thank you for the read, and the typo alert. much appreciation
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Whoa! Absolutely wonderfully beautiful. Such poetry comes from the depth of a touched and aware soul I know. What you describe is exactly how this life is an amazing journey full of revelations.
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Infinite, you really pour it on. you comment is amazing. This is the type of response that is informative. I like the descriptive of a journey full of revelations. I just hope to take heed. Thank you for the read and comment
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You are very welcome ! We all have come to know of the journey by listening in deeply and we all keep hoping we continue to walk our words. I am glad to find company with you here 🙂
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walk our words…can I use that phrase. your comments always add to the poem itself. I can only hope others read the comments you leave. Fantastic
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I am so glad you think so 🙂 Thank you.
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Love that imagery and sound of the thunder and lightning! Such a great way of expressing these emotions. Thank you for sharing–and for your support in me!
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Elle thanks…I’m glad you love the imagery and sound! I really appreciate the read and comment. for I find your poetry delightful
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Thanks Elle, glad you love the imagery. I really appreciate you highlighting those elements. I try use nature in connection with emotions. We are moved more by emotion than logistics. So much appreciation
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Profound and simply beautiful!
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thank you Innervoice for your read and encouraging comment
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The pleasure is mine. Your post is too good! 🙂
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The one thing I really adored about your poetry is that it was quite different and significantly rare from what I have read earlier.
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you keep making me smile. you are a peculiar reader and insightful. yeah I never wanted to be a one style poet. I challenged myself. When I first started writing poems, they all had to rhyme. Now I love free verse. Thank you for noticing. you are a sweetheart. I am humbled to be read by you.
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I think,we all should be bold and brave in whatever we do,so what you did and how you presented it,is truly appreciatable.
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Thank you again for your pleasantries
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Absolutely love this!
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wow… i am super thrilled to know that. my jaws hurting from smiling so hard
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