Poetically purposeful I aim to be
A poetic philosopher I claim to be
Sincerely significant poetry I promote
objective adjectives are the adrenaline antidote
When my ink runs out, I clear my throat
Begin blissfully to recite like I’m sinking in a boat
Running words together that sound compound
Artificial articulation I’m bound to drown
There’s no supplement for authentic communication
See poetry sometimes is self-talk looking for conversation
A truism is a trite idea or expression
Is rhyming an addiction or only my obsession
I’m only casually consumed with confessions
This has been therapeutic…I’m guessing
For me, for you. too late for questions
I write to recite and to learn a lesson
Exclamation point
I have to end this session
Great!
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Thanks Eunice, your comment is great!☺️
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Sounds like a rap! Love it! 🙂
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Bridgette, I am glad you love it! It would take some work to make it into a rap!🤗Is that the type of music you listen to and can you rap.!?
thanks for reading and much appreciation for you sharing your thoughts with me. ☺️🌷 Is that the type
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I listen to all types of music. But when I was reading it, I could hear it in a rap if that makes sense. I use to write song lyrics and I could always hear the melody in my head. ❤️
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Oh okay, that is good to know! I listen to all types of music as well. I am actually working on a rap song and am looking for a singer.
Yeah song lyrics have to be measured, because of the melody. You can sing too.☺️
Thanks for engaging Bridgette, have a wonderful weekend❤️🌹
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What! Love the ending, and the overall flow, esp, when the ink runs out, I clear my throat. Speaks of never being silenced to me.
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you are so kind! Thank you and that is one of my favorite lines next to poetry is self talk looking for a conversation! And you are absolutely on point when it comes to never being silenced. No poet/poetess should! thanks again☺️💐
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“There’s no supplement for authentic communication. See poetry sometimes is self-talk looking for conversation”
I love these lines. ♥️
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LaDonna thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment. That is one of my favorite lines as well. Also know it is always a pleasure to see you have visited☺️ How have you been?
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💗 It is truly beautiful. 💗 I have been well. Thank you for asking. I hope you have and that things are moving along just the way you want them too.
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Glad to hear you have been well☺️❤️ I have been good. Got a course and a half to go in my master’s program and then I will breathe alot easier…lol Have a wonderful weekend🌹
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Congratulations ♥️♥️
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💞🌹🤗
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“When my ink runs out, I clear my throat
Begin blissfully to recite like I’m sinking in a boat”
Wonderful lines. This is so catchy with an awesome rhythm.
You’ve spoken like a true poet. 🙂
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Terveen you are always so encouraging, much appreciation for your energy and comments. Thank you very much☺️💐
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Tony!! This is just AMAZING!!! It’s like poetry and music in one…two of my favorite bh things by one of my favorite artists!!! The rhythm and the flow is electric and brings a smile to the heart. Amazingly well done, my dear friend. This poem is definitely one I’ll revisit 🙌🏻🤗🖤
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Tony, this is so good! I am so proud of you!! This could easily be a motivational poem to get writers, writing, to get poets, penning. A poetic philosopher ~ yes you are! 👏🏼
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Wow, this is excellent! Great work with the rhymes 🙂
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Vignesh, thank you for your encouraging comment. I am glad you found it worthy to share you feelings about this poem… it means alot! have a wonderful weekend
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This is exactly how it is for me too. 😉
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yes we do have that in common☺️
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Nicely scripted. And yes nothing can beat authentic communication. 😊👍
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thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. it means a lot to me💐
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You are welcome. 🙂
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