Excuse Me…Excuse Me Make way…Make way….Step Aside Entitlement shouted, “LIBERTY IS COMING THROUGH” Frustration mumbled, “How about that” Rage thundered “It’s about damn time” Joy declared, “WOW! how splendid” Happiness perked up, “what a joy to behold” Peace whispered, “Interesting” Numbness, unaffected muttered, “or so it seems”
The statue of liberty was brought to America There were many voices heard from different emotions.
How will you stand now? What shall you say, when real liberty comes in your life Not by way of symbolism, but by way of proper spiritual perspective…
Will you usher it into the lives of others feeling their entitled to it Mumble with frustration Rage like a violent wind Sound off with joy like a soothing note blown through a saxophone. Happy Happy feelings embrace the moment with gladness or sit with mindfulness and have a sense of peace or are you the one that’s numb, because its no big deal to you?
Make Way….Make Way….Step aside Liberty is here for you or is someone making way for you because your a representation of Liberty…
Be liberated in your mind Then it can manifest into the natural!
Eleanor I really appreciate the kindness you have shown me🥰. Especially commenting on the narration. I just started adding the audio, So your left me words of encouragement 💕🙏
What an incredible gift this is. Outstanding presentation, Tony. The message, the motivation, the personification, the articulation, your voice, the inflection… Bravo! 👏🏼
I mean…every time I press the comment button…I get here and don’t know what to say…I think the problem is I want to scream…YES KING! I don’t even have to listen to the audio…I HEAR YOU Sir.
Kelly you are wonderful and have been instrumental in my process. I always look forward to reading your comments. You remind, that I have a purpose. So YES QUEEN! you are appreciated!
Omg Tony, words can’t describe just how much I love this. That first stanza is so unique and simply divine. I love the creativity and the powerful messages laced throughout. My favorite part is what you said about proper spiritual perspective rather than symbolism, a big YES to that! And your spoken word, it just brought everything to life!! I love the tones you played with and the confidence you carried throughout. Fantastically done, my dear friend 🖤🤗
WOW, Dear Ace with such grace, you increased my heart’s pace.
Truly, your comment engulfs the main point of the theme. Real liberty is spiritual. Thank you, I am grateful to be read by you and grateful that you share your thoughts with me. Many blessings My lovely friend🖤🤗
👏👏👏👏 Just had a chance to come back and listen to you Tony and LOVE your voice in poetry and your amazing work so important to her. Truly an amazing piece! Thanks for your visit and follow. I’m now following you Tony as well. Stay in touch. 💖💖💖
Cindy, thanks for your kind words and encouragement. Glad you enjoyed my post and audio. and thanks for following me. I am grateful. Have a wonderful rest of the week!
Lauren, you are incredible and, you are so encouraging! I am really honored by your kindness💕🙏🏽 You have reached my heart and given me the confidence to continue with the audio🤗✨ I was uncertain…thank you from the bottom of my heart!
Makes me think if one of my music icons—Bob Marley—and his plea for is to emancipate (liberate) our minds
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Now that is saying something! Bob Marley is an legendary icon! Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me and for stopping by
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A pleasure. I enjoy reading your words. Cheers, Dee
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Wonderful!!! And I love the narration, really adds that extra something special! 🥰
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Eleanor I really appreciate the kindness you have shown me🥰. Especially commenting on the narration. I just started adding the audio, So your left me words of encouragement 💕🙏
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What an incredible gift this is. Outstanding presentation, Tony. The message, the motivation, the personification, the articulation, your voice, the inflection… Bravo! 👏🏼
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Michele, your comments I will treasure. You are an outstanding supporter. Thank you for these words of encouragement!💕🙏
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You are most welcome, Tony. My pleasure. Keep writing and sharing. 💖
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I mean…every time I press the comment button…I get here and don’t know what to say…I think the problem is I want to scream…YES KING! I don’t even have to listen to the audio…I HEAR YOU Sir.
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Kelly you are wonderful and have been instrumental in my process. I always look forward to reading your comments. You remind, that I have a purpose. So YES QUEEN! you are appreciated!
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Okay, YES to the audio as well! Your purpose is loud and clear. Amen.
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🤣🤣 thanks Kelly💕🙏
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Your concluding line – so powerful so beautiful, your poem throughout too!
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thanks Infinite. I am glad it reached you!
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Ah Tony, I left a comment here but it disappeared! Not sure if it went through 🥴
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Omg Tony, words can’t describe just how much I love this. That first stanza is so unique and simply divine. I love the creativity and the powerful messages laced throughout. My favorite part is what you said about proper spiritual perspective rather than symbolism, a big YES to that! And your spoken word, it just brought everything to life!! I love the tones you played with and the confidence you carried throughout. Fantastically done, my dear friend 🖤🤗
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WOW, Dear Ace with such grace, you increased my heart’s pace.
Truly, your comment engulfs the main point of the theme. Real liberty is spiritual. Thank you, I am grateful to be read by you and grateful that you share your thoughts with me. Many blessings My lovely friend🖤🤗
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The audio garnishes the post.👌
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👏👏👏👏 Just had a chance to come back and listen to you Tony and LOVE your voice in poetry and your amazing work so important to her. Truly an amazing piece! Thanks for your visit and follow. I’m now following you Tony as well. Stay in touch. 💖💖💖
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Cindy, thanks for your kind words and encouragement. Glad you enjoyed my post and audio. and thanks for following me. I am grateful. Have a wonderful rest of the week!
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It was my pleasure and so good.. you’re most welcome. I’m thrilled to and love your kind hearted response. You do the same and I’ll see you around💖
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Great reading! Always better to hear how it’s meant to sound and read from the poet.
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Thanks Jay, appreciate you. your comment is affirming.
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Thanks for reading us the poem. Liberty for all.
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yes indeed, liberty for all. thank you for leaving a comment!
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Wonderful. The audio narration adds charm to your poems👌🏼👌🏼
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aww thanks, that means a lot to me! much appreciation🙏🤗💕
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Again, a great recording! Such character in your voice. 🙂 Please post more audio with your poems!
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Lauren, you are incredible and, you are so encouraging! I am really honored by your kindness💕🙏🏽 You have reached my heart and given me the confidence to continue with the audio🤗✨ I was uncertain…thank you from the bottom of my heart!
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Yay, excellent! Be proud of yourself, you’re making this new stage happen 🙂
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thank you again🤗✨
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Your narration is moving!!!
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wow! and wow! thanks,
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You’re welcome!
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