The pearls we see in another person eyes
The passion we see that has died.
Both consuming and pulling, the onlookers in
Further in
with each silent staring moment.
This is the by-product
That leads to questions.
Questions of our quality of life
Not the length of it
Questions of our dimming passions
Not the measure of it
Questions that scare us
To live fully
Questions that scare us
To die in essence.
Therefore, the eyes
We look deeply into
Is
sometimes a smoking mirror of wishing
Other times it’s a reflection
Of what lay dormant in our heart
One time it was what
We feared the most.
Eyes that looked back
Screaming I love you
Shouting you are worthy
Whispering you are not your mistakes.
With eyes wide open
What will you see
With eyes wide open
What don’t you want to be seen…
Reflections: A Mindful Journey 
Well, Tom, this is a gem of a poem; meaningful, sophisticated, like all your writing is, and beautiful.
Thank you.
Joanna
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Joanna, thank you! your comment is meaningful to me. I am humbled!
Tony
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The eyes tell it all nothing can be hidden from view. Some eyes have so much depth and beauty even though they show much pain. Others are dull with no luster whatsoever. Well written.
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thank you! your comment is as always insightful and enhances the post. really I appreciate you!
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You are most welcome
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We should really learn to look beyond the portrayed or seemingly obvious. #seeing eyes. ❤
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seeing eyes! thanks for seeing the truth.
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Apologies, I am. dreadful with names, of course, you are Tony. Still, whatever your name, Tony,
the poem is brilliant, and I only wish I could write like this.
Joanna
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No apologies needed, I appreciate your support and stopping by and still received your comment. We can’t all have the same talent. I wish I could put together presentations like you have.
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Oh wow! I saved this. It’s so good..
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Wow! this one must have been special! A writer of your magnitude and depth. I am honored and humbled. I know different poems reach out differently. And I am one to write in a variety of styles, claiming none is better than the other. So seriously, I do appreciate you and take not for granted you feeling a need to save this. Thank you from the bottom of my heart that sends a notion & motions my mouth to smile:)
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So perfect and beautifully said! When my kids were very young, I used to say that I need to see the spark in their eyes after they come home from an activity. That’s how I would want them choose what they engaged in – it would have them beaming with joy. As life continued to happen, they grew up and I had to admit that some of their spark had dimmed. It becomes such a profound journey to aspire to keep that spark alive, the heart filled with joy and trust that each one of us finds our way. There is indeed so much behind our eyes …
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Absolutely enjoyed your comment. thanks! We have to keep what really matters in front of us. The relationships we have with one another. Do not become weary in well doing, because at the proper time we shall reap our reward. That is the hope and my mnatra.
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https://fabricthatmademe.wordpress.com/2020/11/02/the-vincent-ehindero-blog-award/ I’ve nominated you for an award if you’re intrested!
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Thanks I appreciate the nomination. your kindness will never be forgotten!
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So beautiful and deep ❤️ thank you for sharing
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you are welcome! thank you for reading and commenting.
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When you embrace the beauty, fear of the unknown will never be what’s seen. Nice share!
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absolutely, thanks for chiming in with such insight
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Blessings!
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This is beautifully written!
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ahh thank you very much!
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You’re most welcome!
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It’s a beautiful poem, Tony! 🙂
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profound insights. well written and expressed!
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Thanks! I am glad you found value and i really appreciate you leaving a comment!
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Great poem! The ending made me pause. Happy writing! ~WB
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Your writing is truly beautiful. Full of truth and hope. It moves one to deeper thinking. Lovely.
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LaDonna, I am very appreciative of you stopping by. I have visited your blog and recognize you heart that desires to serve a person and assist others in wellness. Therefore, your comment is well received with humbleness. Thank you for finding my writing beautiful, deep and lovely. Have a wonderful week and lets continue to offer the world something helpful and beautiful. You my dear make a difference
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Thank you for these kind and wonderful words. I genuinely appreciate this and recognize this same compassion in your written work. Have the very best day. I look forward to reading more of your work. 💕
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xo:)
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