Shaped by social events
that others say is irrelevant
Money seen and money spent
Raging Question?
Where has all the time went?
Getting older, angry and alone
A once valued king/queen
Now disowned
Unknown and dethroned…
Bitter
Their true love they pushed away
Their own wisdom they disobeyed
conflict and complaints
tick tock plagues their day
When can there be rest
How can you feel at your best
Did you know you were blessed.
Too busy looking in the social mirror
things got blurrier not clearer
O’my
who am I, too scared to ask
what dream, that is too much of a task…
Surely
Examining and changing it’s not too late
living life to the fullest needs no rebate
Peace or frustration, what’s to debate
Love is a pronunciation that one can demonstrate
Tick Tock
Such a powerful writing.It evoked so much emotions in me.
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Neha, thank you and I appreciate you as a reader. It warms my heart to be read by you
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And I am treble blessed to have came across a person like you.
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Then we are blessed…because I feel the same way about you! Here’s a hug and a smile for you, because of you
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Too busy looking in the social mirror
things got blurrier not clearer
Love is a pronunciation that one can demonstrate
These lines leaped out at me and I thought Brilliant!!
You said a lot here and so beautifully in your poem.
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Infinite, you sure provided a smile today. That social mirror is one of my favorite lines, because that mirror is full of lies and delusions… thank you for the visit, read and the brilliant comment
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This poem is so great with so much meaning…i loved this ..,very good👍
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Velvet, surely your comment is a warm embrace. A comment from such a prolific writer as yourself cause me to be elated…thank you for the visit, read and kind comment
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You are welcome💕💕
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Such a powerful piece! Emotionally appealing!
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thanks maanini for the visit, read and impacting comment
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So well done… every line rings a bell to get up and LIVE!
Thank you
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thank you, thank you, thank you! your presence has blessed my site.
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The pleasure is mine
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No, it’s never too late to realize what you have and to live life anew. Really like this.
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thank you Tosha for the visit and especially for leaving a comment… much appreciation
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You’re welcome.
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every word is drenched with emotions !
its so beautiful !
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you are too kind! thank you for the visit, read and comment… I humbly smile due to it
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Brilliant 💜
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you are so kind, thank you for the visit read and comment
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♥️
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
EXCELLENT MESSAGE–WELL-PRESENTED!
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when you’ve got love in your heart it’s not too late..
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absolutely… thanks again…appreciate your comments
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welcome…
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