A woman without self-worth
Is the most tragic story ever told
She has no beauty
To testify by
Her essence becomes a lie
She rips off her wings and refuse to fly
Locked away her soul cry
Dehydrated from tears
Running like a waterfall
Broken promises and flattery
From men that crawl
The serpent keeps striking
βShe rips off her wings and refuses to fly.β Your poetry is just golden Tony! Canβt wait until you start your Youtube channel π
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Thank you, you are such a sweetheart! I am grateful to be read by you. I sent you an email did you get???
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Aaw, the pleasure is all mine π
Yeah, I got your comment and to answer your question; yes, it was me haha.
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a little boldness!!! ha ha ha
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Haha π
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“The serpent keeps striking.” he certainly does.
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thanks for the read and leaving a comment
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You’re welcome.
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Wow…Love this! Very well written and bold. βRipping off her wingsβ is a sign of helpless.
Self Worth is Valuable. We must embrace and useless
When we leave
open, vulnerable it becomes like playground.
InHisCare πππ
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wow…love your comment…thanks
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…but when she finally crushes the head of the serpent, she forever frees her heart; to soar even higher! Lovely piece!
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a beautiful moment that will be! thanks for the conclusion…
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An absolute pleasure! Have a wonderful weekend!
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you as well…
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Applaudable poetry!
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thank you and so is your comment
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So beautifully spun! What a sad soul indeed, it makes me want to wrap their sadness with the warmth of the sun and fill them with the magic of the moon that they may once again find the spark the yearns to be lit within them. π π
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Only you could respond in such a beautiful way, that even in this cold state your warmth is felt…thank you
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You’re so welcome π€ β€οΈ
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Brilliant!β€
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thanks
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Well said ….self love is essential which enables you to know your worth …… π
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absolutely Sakshi, you are a kindred spirit in that regard… thanks for reading and commenting
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Pleasure was all mine and the feeling is mutual π
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π
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