More than a notion, my body is in motion.
Signifying, verifying
I believe you are the one for me
With unflinching courage,
It shall be, it will be
I don’t have to ask the lonely
My evacuated heart has rested
In hands of doom.
Made love to misery in a
Painful purple padded room…
BOOM! BOOM!
I tap danced to the rhythm of your walk
I hummed the words of your talk
UNBELIEVABLE!!!
Cause I once had my very own song
Going and going pleasantly strong
That is…..Until you
Barged into the silent chambers of my mind
Opening my eyes heart that was blind
In all languages, truly
I have eyes for you
I light up like a Christmas tree
Around you
Yes! You’re the co-star
Of this high impact movie.
Your down to earth
Universal, beautiful in and out
Shag me….you’re quite groovy
Very romantic, though I have to admit, that last line took me by surprise haha
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thanks, ha ha, yeah I don’t know what came over me, it moved to a comical space… I might think about changing it, “Austin Powers”… baby…lol
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Haha, what a euphemism 😅❤️
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This is absolutely lovely! So beautifully written are your words…. So romantic and charming. Like a movie with many scenes, I can imagine every word, every beat, as you tap dance on the scene.
InHisCare 🙏
Yonnie 💜
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Lighting up like a Christmas 🎄, is deeply expressed…beautiful line. Your love will appreciate such thoughtful creativeness. InHisCare 💜
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Just out of curiosity but is this a poem you wrote recently or one you dug up from the archives of the past? A lot of my poetry that I post is pretty recent (like I posted one I literally wrote today) since a lot of my poems from the past are from being an early teen is pretty cringeworthy haha
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This came from the archives… I don’t have a special interest right now… It’s funny, cause when I wrote it, I wasn’t in a relationship either…lol
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Haha, sometimes imagining we’re in love is good enough because it doesn’t include the actual stresses!!!
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there is some truth to that. I do believe in Love and believe the stresses that I had in previous relationships didn’t have to be… Are you not in a relationship?
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I definitely believe in love too. As cheesy as it sounds I think theres someone out there for everyone. And nope, I’m not in a relationship. Truth is I’ve never been in one before but I have been in love I guess you could say. What about you? Are you in a relationship atm?
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nope!!! I won’t run from one, but the dating scene can be so brutal…
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Haha, I can only imagine. The pressure as well to make small talk with someone you don’t even know
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Well I shall return later…got a few errands to run… appreciate the conversation as always
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Me too 😊
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by the way, I will have a youtube set up, and will recite some of my poems and upload them
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Oh, thats awesome! I’ll finally get to see the face behind the comments haha 😅
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lol… it won’t be anything you could have imagined… ha ha… now I just got nervous
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I seriously admire anyone who does spoken word or any form of public speaking for that matter. If it was me I’d probably pass out from nervousness 😂
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lol… you would be great… just don’t look at anybody… and that’s why doing it in a empty room just recording, helped me gain confidence… Though up in Oshkosh, I sweated off like 5 lbs. My nervous… it’s a good way to lose weight… lol
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I mean, they say just imagine the audience in their underwear but I’m guessing that is definitely not a piece of advice you should follow 😂 I hope all goes well for your channel. I’ll be sure to check it out and support a fellow poet ❤️
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your such a sweetheart… i really do appreciate you… However, you will have to reveal something to me as well… so I won’t have to imagine anymore…lol… let’s be brave….ha ha
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Aaw, you’re sweet but I don’t reveal that easily I’m afraid and some things are best left to the imagination 😉
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Wow I loved the rhythm and beat of your words, also such lightness and brightness of energy that brought a smile to me as I continued to read 🙂
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wow…look at your comment… thanks very much Infinite
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Sweet and beautiful!😊💖
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thanks…much appreciation
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You’re very welcome!😊
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