I want to dance that dance
let my courage of conviction have a chance
Tango then two step: Now freeze
pause in the moment to feel the breeze
put my anxious mind at ease
enter the moment and breathe
Hands raised, I surrender to receive
fall on my knees because I believe
There’s more than my eyes can perceive
As I become the bright lights on Christmas Eve
Then toss myself as I rise and am surprised
the dance has not drained, but energized
My own freedom I don’t recognize
That is until I am mesmerize
by that which I see in her eyes
Then I shall know the chance from the dance
has equated to a sunrise…
You have never failed to amaze me with your words.
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you are such a sweetheart…thank you… do you like to dance
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Absolutely beautiful, truly loved this poem! 🙂
My favorite lines …
I surrender to receive
fall on my knees because I believe
There’s more than my eyes can perceive
It took me quite a while to learn to soften and surrender, only then I could see the conviction and courage bear fruit.
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I am glad you learned how to. Thank you for the read and always appreciate your insights and comments… smiling I am
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My pleasure 🙂
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Dancing through the words makes me gleefully dizzy! 💜😊
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I see you still know how to tango… Thank you my poetess friend. much appreciation for you
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It’s beautifully designed with emotions 🙂
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thanks for the visit, read and encouraging comment. much appreciation
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I just skimmed through your post and the word you used are wow. And I must say, it really cool, it that gives people a chance to think about life.
Please keep the motivational word coming.
Thank you so much for adding an inspired words to me this morning.
Happy Sunday
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace ✌and Love ❤
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Thanks for accepting and following my blog.
I’m available to read your post at my convenient time.
You have such an interesting topic I will love to read in
your blog.
I still remain the simple blogger…..
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace ✌and Love ❤
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your presence and comment is appreciated and encouraging… thank you
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Thank you! I appreciate your thoughtful response.
Such an awesome way of replying someone. Thanks. Again
As always your posts are incredible and I enjoying reading every word down till the last line. I must say that you are probably one of the excellent bloggers on WordPress that write inspired
Writing/post
Also, I just posted: OSCILLATION
Would love to know your views. Love to see your contributions on it. I’m always excited for your comment. 🙂
You are welcome
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace ✌and Love ❤
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if time permits or when time permits I will check it out… thank again
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Ok
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This is so well crafted with wonderful imagery created in my mind. I absolutely love the way you used rhyme! Unusual but so effective. Well done.
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Thanks Walt… I am not a studied poet… I write in many styles that may not match with conventional/traditional counted meter lines. However it works for me. I appreciate the recognition. Again thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment…
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I am definitely not a studied Poet. I break rules and my poetry doesn’t follow any particular form. I write from my heart. I like the way you write.
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thank you! And from reading your work, it’s clear that you do
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I just write what I feel 🙂
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Lovely!😊
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thank you for the read and lovely comment…much appreciation
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Love the flow❤️
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thanks, I see you have read several of my post… I am blessed by your presence and your kindness
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I loved to read your posts..you really deserve appreciation😊
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Zee you are too kind…now my cheeks hurt from this enormous smile… lol
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Glad to know that you are smiling🤗😇
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This is wonderful! So beautifully penned!❤
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thank you so much for the read and comment…
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Absolutely beautifully written
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thanks, i wasn’t sure about how this one would read… I didn’t do it justice with format… It is better in my opinion if recited. I’m looking into creating a youtube channel… I’m technology challenged though…lol Nevertheless thank you for being a blessing and blessing me with you support
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Yes, it would be a nice spoken… YouTube, that would be great! I’m sure you will master YouTubing.
Praises…InHisCare
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thanks for the reassuring confidence!!! I didn’t see a contact for you on your page… I would send you a video I did
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Lol.. I have a contact page?? I just jumped in and started creating, writing, etc. 😂 lol…sure
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lol… and creating you did
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